Talk:Ol' Dirty Bastard/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: - NeutralHomer • Talk • 02:53, 31 May 2010 (UTC)

GA review (see here for criteria)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS):

   Alot of WP:PEACOCK language, alot of this information could be cut down into several paragraphs, not a year-by-year timeline.

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

   On this article, there are 14 references for the entire article. This needs to come up ALOT to be even B Grade, not alone GA.

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

   It is broad in its coverage, but it is too broad in my opinion. Too much information can be a bad thing. Stick with the bullet points.

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

   The article history looks like a warzone. That needs to be cleaned up.

6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

   Only two images (one in the infobox) is not enough for GA status. More images, sourced and captioned, are needed.

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

   At this point, I don't think the article even meets B grade and for a former FA this is sad. Very sad. This article needs references, a shorter version on the history, and images. Please team up with someone who knows their articles and how to write them. Be open to ideas and come back in about 6 months with a fresh new article ready to go. At present, even a couple tweeks isn't going to change this article to GA. - NeutralHomer • Talk • 02:51, 31 May 2010 (UTC)