Talk:Old Blockhouse/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Zawed (talk · contribs) 08:25, 28 March 2014 (UTC)

I'll take this one since I enjoyed the Cow Tower article so much...will add comments over the weekend. Zawed (talk) 08:25, 28 March 2014 (UTC)

Comments as follows:

16th century

• I wonder if some context for Francis Flemming (and possibly John Killigrew and William Tyrell) is needed. Was Flemming a military engineer?

17th century

• Interregnum, Royalists and Robert Blake not linked in this section. All are linked in the lead.
• "Tresco became a base for Royalist privateers and Parliament became concerned that the Dutch": repeated use of "became".

18th-21st centuries

• link Duchy of Cornwall, Duke of Marlborough

Other stuff

• No duplicate links.
• Image tags look good.
• No dab links.
• External links work OK.

Pretty good work. Minor quibbles only. Zawed (talk) 02:46, 30 March 2014 (UTC)

• Thanks Zawed! I'll make the changes on Thursday night. Hchc2009 (talk) 17:11, 31 March 2014 (UTC)

Should be all done. I couldn't find any more on Tyrell, unfortunately. Thanks for the review! Hchc2009 (talk) 16:39, 3 April 2014 (UTC)

Shame about Tyrell, but I think the context is better now for Flemming and Killigrew. Looks good, so am passing as GA. A pleasure to review. Cheers. Zawed (talk) 21:56, 4 April 2014 (UTC)