Talk:Olivia de Havilland/GA1
Latest comment: 8 years ago by Dr. Blofeld in topic GA review
GA review
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Reviewer: Dr. Blofeld (talk · contribs) 16:46, 6 May 2016 (UTC)
I will review this tomorrow, definitely now;-)♦ Dr. Blofeld 19:35, 8 May 2016 (UTC)
Reading now.♦ Dr. Blofeld 15:08, 9 May 2016 (UTC)
- Lede
- " and psychological dramas playing unglamorous roles in such films as" Try "and unglamorous roles in psychological dramas such as"
- " and television feature films, such as Anastasia: The Mystery of Anna for which she received a Primetime Emmy Award." -comma in the wrong place, move it to after Anna.
- Early films
- "Los Feliz section " -link?
- "The film was released in February 1938,[81" -move this up to where you mention "The film, which marks her first appearance in three-strip Technicolor".
- War years
- "While the comedy is light, it is also intelligent, " -in who's opinion?
- Personal life
- "Stewart in fact proposed" -"in fact" not needed.
- Link "Paris Match"?
- Already linked in the lead and in the article above.
- " Bois de Boulogne park in the Rive Droite section" -did you link these?
- Already linked in the lead and in the article above.
Excellent job, very comprehensive. Perhaps a little too detailed in places but that can be addressed if needs be at PR stage. Certainly looks well researched enough to be a future FAC. Good job!♦ Dr. Blofeld 15:59, 9 May 2016 (UTC)
- Thank you, Doctor, for reviewing this article. I appreciate your time very much. Sincerely, Bede735 (talk) 16:41, 9 May 2016 (UTC)
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
- Is it reasonably well written?
- A. Prose quality:
- B. MoS compliance:
- Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
- A. References to sources:
- B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
- C. No original research:
- Is it broad in its coverage?
- A. Major aspects:
- B. Focused:
- Is it neutral?
- Fair representation without bias:
- Is it stable?
- No edit wars, etc:
- Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
- A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
- B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
- Overall:
- Pass or Fail: Excellent job!♦ Dr. Blofeld 16:57, 9 May 2016 (UTC)