Talk:Olympic Tower/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 23:31, 1 July 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 23:31, 1 July 2021 (UTC)

Comments

• Move "Use" templates below the hatnote.
• Add alt text to every image being used.
• "the most dense" → "the densest"
• "a wind blew" - is the "a" necessary?
• Don't use colons in the sentence starting with "Law firm".
• Capitalize "President" before Corazon Aquino.
• Wikilink The New York Times, John Tierney (journalist), Mimi Sheraton, Bill Geist, and Sarah Lyall.

Progress

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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@Some Dude From North Carolina: Thanks. I've fixed all of these. Epicgenius (talk) 19:05, 9 July 2021 (UTC)