Talk:Omak School District/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: PrairieKid (talk · contribs) 04:57, 5 April 2013 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

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I am going to have to quickfail this nomination. For the subject, the article has more information than I would ever have thought to be out there. Omak School District is on the Wikimap- however, with the prose in the shape it is, the images and the references being how they are, I just can't see it getting to that GA level. It just isn't a big enough subject.

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

   A lot of run-on sentences, some spelling errors... really does not flow very well.

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

   The article cites the school district's website, The Spokes-Review about 30% of the time, The Wenatchee World about 20% of the time, The Nat. Cent. For. Edu. Stats. another 30% of the time, and even cites the Yellow Pages. (Which I have never seen before.

   The sources are all reliable though, so I do not see that as a concern. TBrandley 22:23, 7 April 2013 (UTC)

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

   That checks out.

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

   The article really does need some images.

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

   Does not meet criteria. PrairieKid (talk) 04:57, 5 April 2013 (UTC)