Talk:On a Clear Day You Can See Forever (soundtrack)/GA1
Latest comment: 6 years ago by Aoba47 in topic GA Review
The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
GA Review
edit| GA toolbox |
|---|
| Reviewing |
Article (edit | visual edit | history) · Article talk (edit | history) · Watch
Reviewer: Aoba47 (talk · contribs) 18:59, 26 June 2018 (UTC)
- Grabbing for a review if that is okay with you. Aoba47 (talk) 18:59, 26 June 2018 (UTC)
- Lead and infobox
- Everything looks good here.
- Background and songs
- For this sentence (On the album's fourth track, "Melinda", Luiz Bonfá and Maria Toledo and credited as additional lyricists), I think you mean “are credited” instead of “and credited”.
- For this sentence (The album's second song in an orchestral version of), I think you mean “is an orchestral version” instead of “in”.
- Reception
- Everything looks good here
- Release history
- I believe that the article should have a separate section for this.
- Final comments
- Good work with this. This is a relatively short article, and I could only find three relatively minor things that need revision. Once my comments are addressed, I will pass this as a good article. Aoba47 (talk) 20:33, 26 June 2018 (UTC)
- Aoba47 – Thanks for the review. I fixed the two spelling errors you pointed out and added the 'Release history' section. Thanks again, Carbrera (talk) 22:46, 1 July 2018 (UTC).
- Thank you for addressing everything; I will ✓ Pass this. Aoba47 (talk) 01:24, 2 July 2018 (UTC)
- Aoba47 – Thanks for the review. I fixed the two spelling errors you pointed out and added the 'Release history' section. Thanks again, Carbrera (talk) 22:46, 1 July 2018 (UTC).
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.