Talk:One Energy
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Some proposed changes
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Hello! This is my first time suggesting edits as a COI so apologies if I miss the mark on any of the formatting guidelines. I did my best to educate myself on the process beforehand. For direct replacements, I followed the {textdiff} prompt's, and for new additions I just explained where things could be expanded and added new text.
| − | One Energy Enterprises, doing business as One Energy, is a private American | + | One Energy Enterprises, doing business as One Energy, is a private American industrial power company headquartered in Findlay, Ohio that constructs, owns, and operates industrial power systems and infrastructure.
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Since the original was written the company has expanded beyond just wind energy, so "industrial power company" captures this a bit more.
| − | + | It is the largest installer of on-site megawatt-scale wind energy in the United States, responsible for over 40% of all distributed wind energy installed in the United States in 2019.
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I added the first sentence to show that wind-energy is still being done despite adding other power sources, and updated the stat from 2023 Distributed Wind Market Report published by the U.S. Department of Energy. The relevant data is pulled from the graph on pg. 6.
I also think it might benefit from spelling out some of the newer services with a second paragraph in the intro:
The company has developed multiple energy services aimed at helping its customers control costs and directly power industrial operations. In addition to its Wind for Industry and Managed High Voltage services, One Energy also designed and installed the first fully digital, transmission-voltage substation in 2023. Source: https://www.tdworld.com/substations/article/21273289/one-energy-enterprises-digital-substation-in-findlay-ohio-energized-and-operational
In the first paragraph of the History section following the sentence, "Since then, One Energy has continued to develop projects consisting of typically 1-3 wind turbines (each 1.5 MW) of on-site wind energy for industrial energy users." Can we add: "In 2016, One Energy acquired Cancalia Engineering & Consulting LLC, the developer of Continuum wind-flow modeling software expanding its suite of proprietary resource and assessment tools." Source: https://www.windpowerengineering.com/one-energy-acquires-cancalia-continuum-wind-flow-modeling-software/
In the second paragraph, we can add "One Energy Analytics" to the list of companies under the main One Energy Solutions LLC.
There is also more recent information on the Megawatt Scholarship. After "In 2014, the company began its "Megawatt Scholarship" program, which offers a $5,000 scholarship per turbine per year to local high school graduates pursuing a degree in a STEM field." Can we add: "As of 2022, the program has awarded over $500,000 in scholarships." Source: https://www.wtol.com/article/news/local/megawatt-scholarships-students-studying-stem-college/512-070766a1-c2b1-4253-83be-9a0050b062da
Lastly, I was wondering if we could expand the Products and Services section with some of the unlisted services. In addition to the existing Wind for Energy section, we could also include:
ManagedHV
One Energy’s ManagedHV systems provide a high-voltage distribution system that enables customers to efficiently move power, monitor usage, and protect plants from grid issues. These systems offer an expandable and adaptable platform, allowing customers to integrate additional distributed energy resources (DERs) as needed.
Megawatt Hubs
In September of 2023, the company unveiled its first Megawatt Hub, powered by the first fully digital, transmission-voltage substation in the United States. While a typical factory uses between five and ten MW of power, One Energy’s Megawatt Hub is a 30 MW site that is expandable to 150 MW. Source: https://finance.yahoo.com/news/one-energy-announces-commercial-operations-120000022.html?guccounter=1&guce_referrer=aHR0cHM6Ly93d3cuZ29vZ2xlLmNvbS8&guce_referrer_sig=AQAAALepGnAw-GHmO2b0rHwaN7fv10skaRYUab_h1cloJZIW5iil4g-ix8Teeo6po3Qhk5knA0CH8DS7xXLuWPA0EKbpRJKt2Y1TnyJB6OPcbq1PLaPtNh62LElx0QSlBjlIIGi3mTakzwd4RrT1lyevp6EBGgPKDhGnqh1_RMK-sKKt
Net Zero Projects
Net Zero Projects integrate wind, solar, and other power technologies into a single system to help enable industrial facilities to achieve net zero annualized energy consumption from the grid. These behind-the-meter projects help support sustainability goals by reducing carbon emissions and enhancing energy efficiency.
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TyleratOE (talk) 15:23, 13 August 2024 (UTC)
Not Done: Request appears to be purely promotional in intent. Axad12 (talk) 18:38, 13 August 2024 (UTC)
Clarifying Proposed Edits
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Hi, I proposed some edits a few weeks back and had them all blanket rejected for being "purely promotional in intent." I've obviously acknowledged the COI, but wanted to revisit the suggested edits to the lead section. These were updates to existing information aimed at improving accuracy to the article, with appropriate outside citations. Again, not trying to stir the pot with the previous rejection, but figured I would just walk through that section again to make sure they weren't just lumped in with some of the other proposed additions later in the article. I'm open to any suggestions on how to adjust things to meet expectations/guidelines!
| − | One Energy Enterprises, doing business as One Energy, is a private American | + | One Energy Enterprises, doing business as One Energy, is a private American industrial power company headquartered in Findlay, Ohio that constructs, owns, and operates industrial power systems and infrastructure.
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This edit updates what the company does. While its initial focus was singularly on wind-energy it has since expanded into wider-scale industrial power systems beyond just wind energy.
| − | + | It is the largest installer of on-site megawatt-scale wind energy in the United States, responsible for over 40% of all distributed wind energy installed in the United States in 2019.
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This edit takes an existing stat published by the U.S. Department of Energy, and replaces it with an updated statistic from 2020. https://www.energy.gov/sites/default/files/2023-08/distributed-wind-market-report-2023-edition_0.pdf
The last addition to the lead section was:
The company has developed multiple energy services aimed at helping its customers directly power industrial operations. In addition to its Wind for Industry and Managed High Voltage services, One Energy also designed and installed the first fully digital, transmission-voltage substation in 2023.
- This just spells out some ways the company has moved beyond just doing wind energy, and references the fact that they built and installed the first fully digital substation. That claim is supported with an article from T&D World Magazine, a publication that has covered utility news since 1948. https://www.tdworld.com/substations/article/21273289/one-energy-enterprises-digital-substation-in-findlay-ohio-energized-and-operational
~~~~ TyleratOE (talk) 15:11, 17 September 2024 (UTC)
Approved. Thank you for the rework here. I'm happy to approve you to make the relevant changes, supported by the citations provided. Kind regards, Axad12 (talk) 17:11, 25 October 2024 (UTC)
