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Talk:One More Chance (Madonna song)/GA1

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Latest comment: 10 years ago by XXSNUGGUMSXX in topic GA Review

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Reviewer: XXSNUGGUMSXX (talk) 18:24, 10 April 2014 (UTC)Reply

Prose
Lead
  • "Madonna wrote the lyrics in reversion of what actually she experienced in her life" sounds somewhat confusing. It should be specified to indicate whether the lyrics are the opposite of what her actual life experiences were or that they happened in reverse order.
  • "It performed weakly on the record charts"..... number two on Italian charts certainly isn't weak. This sentence would read better as something like "It peaked number two in Italy while charting within the top forty in Australia, Finland, Sweden, and the United Kingdom."
Background and writing
  • "the third single in several European countries"..... which European countries?
  • Specify a time range when her interview with Spin was
Critical reception
  • I did some minor quotation mark fixing
  • If Louis Virtel commented on the song through two different sites, why not just go with one?
Sourcing
  • No problems here
Coverage
  • Are any particular reasons known as to why she has never performed the song live? If so, include them.
Neutrality
  • No problems here
Stability
  • No problems here
GA Result
  • If these are all addressed within the next seven days, I will pass the GAN.
Lol, I just want to address these, and when I clicked the save button, the "edit conflict" message came. Thanks @IndianBio: Bluesatellite (talk) 11:06, 11 April 2014 (UTC)Reply
Passing! XXSNUGGUMSXX (talk) 13:22, 11 April 2014 (UTC)Reply
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