Talk:Only Girl (In the World)/GA2
Latest comment: 13 years ago by (CK)Lakeshade in topic GA Review
GA Review
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Reviewer: - (CK)Lakeshade - talk2me - 22:27, 23 June 2011 (UTC)
Im sorry but im failing this article.
- WP:LEAD; Lead should be expanded and flushed out. You don't have critical reception mentioned in the lead.
- No background section?
- Critical reception; there is no structure or flow, again, its one paragraph when it could easily be two.
- Awards; why is there a table? Doesnt seem very neutral, WP:OR issues.
- Chart performance needs a copy edit.
- Music video; why are there subsections when the section itself isnt very big. Image fails NFCC.
- Covers; again WP:OR issues.
- Tracklisting; OR
- MOS on references, incorrect titles, work/publisher fields, italics, dates.. ect ect..
Im not going into prose issues as the above are enough for a fail, further, why have you nominated this article considering i wrote the majority of the article, thats not very good faith and it seems like you are nominating for racking up GA's not for trying to make the article the best it can be. This was a rushed nominated and i think you should withhold any more nominations and start asking for peer reviews first. Thank you. - (CK)Lakeshade - talk2me - 22:27, 23 June 2011 (UTC)