Talk:Ooedigera/GA1
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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 23:09, 14 March 2020 (UTC)
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editLead - "Northern Greenland" - I don't believe northern should be capitalized in this case.
Infobox - The order doesn't seem to be cited anywhere.
- It's classified in the family Vetulicolidae, therefore it has to be classified in the order Vetulicolida User:Dunkleosteus77 |push to talk 19:19, 15 March 2020 (UTC)
Taxonomy Some MOS:SEAOFBLUE stuff, but I don't think it's avoidable in this case.
"(the others undescribed from ..." - What does this signify?
Palaeocology - Is there a reason the Cambrian Explosion navbox is in this section? The Cambrian isn't mentioned at all in the section.
- It describes the Cambrian environment User:Dunkleosteus77 |push to talk 19:19, 15 March 2020 (UTC)
Is there a wikilink for nektobenthic like there is for nektonic?
"It is possible vetulicolians did both" - Is both filter feeding and deposit feeding?
- yeah, clarified User:Dunkleosteus77 |push to talk 19:19, 15 March 2020 (UTC)
Duplicate links of filter feeding and filter feeders in this section, they both go to the same article.
The lead states that Ooedigera lived in an oxygen minimum zone, but the last section indicates that it may have been one. Unless I'm misunderstanding something, the lead should reflect the uncertainty.
References and images are good, placing on hold. {u|Dunkleosteus77}}. Hog Farm (talk) 18:59, 15 March 2020 (UTC)
- @Dunkleosteus77: - All concerns, including the northern Greenland one, addressed. Passing for GA now. Hog Farm (talk) 22:30, 15 March 2020 (UTC)