Talk:Operation Corridor 92/GA1
Latest comment: 10 years ago by Tomobe03 in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 11:05, 21 February 2014 (UTC)
I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 11:05, 21 February 2014 (UTC)
- was an operation conducted during the Bosnian War by the Army of Republika Srpska (VRS) against the forces of the Croatian Defence Council (HVO) and the Croatian Army (HV) fought in northern Bosnia Delete "fought".
- Fixed.
- between VRS-controlled territories. "the" VRS.
- Added.
- Derventa was quickly captured on 4–5 July and continued to roll back the HVO and the HV troops. Something's missing here.
- Indeed. Added the missing bit.
- VRS 16th Motorised Brigade the Tactical Group 1 of the 1st Krajina Corps Huh?
- Ugh. The brigade was made a part of ad-hoc (temporary) TG1, the TG1 was established by the 1st Corps for the purpose of execution of the operation and the TG1 was meant to be disbanded after the operation.
- No DABs, external links and images are good. No overlinks.
- Capitalize the journal title for Marijan.
- Capitalised.
Thank you very much for taking time to have a look at the article. Could you please review the changes, especially my attempt at clarification of relationship of the 16th Brigade to the Tactical Group 1 and the 1st Corps. Cheers--Tomobe03 (talk) 13:53, 27 February 2014 (UTC)