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Article is written from a strong POV, looks like a member of the organization wrote it as advertising. Strongly suggest some heavy rewording, though I don't know enough on the topic to do it myself. 76.232.70.132 (talk) 05:36, 1 April 2012 (UTC)Reply
I have to agree. The article appears to have been entered by the PAO of the organization. I'd attempt a re-write, but am poor at prose. I'll also say, as a military retiree, I'd also have a potential conflict of interest in editing, as a few of my men over the years utilized their services. Can someone please enhance the article and make it less of a public affairs offering?Wzrd1 (talk) 02:59, 30 July 2012 (UTC)Reply
