Talk:Orchard Beach (Bronx)/GA1
Latest comment: 6 years ago by Courcelles in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 05:35, 9 August 2018 (UTC)
- Opening for review. Courcelles (talk) 05:35, 9 August 2018 (UTC)
- "destroyed two existing manors" How? Were they city-owned or eminent domained?
- I think they were city-owned since the city bought all the land for Pelham Bay Park in 1887. epicgenius (talk) 14:45, 9 August 2018 (UTC)
- " It comprises the Bronx's only beach" is an awkward sentence.
- Fixed.
- Source 5 is dead, also, no need to shout.
- Fixed, and also decapitalized the rest of the sources.
- Otherwise I'm not seeing anything amiss. Courcelles (talk) 05:53, 9 August 2018 (UTC)
- @Courcelles: Thanks for the review. I have addressed all the issues you mentioned above. epicgenius (talk) 14:45, 9 August 2018 (UTC)
- Promoting. Courcelles (talk) 15:11, 9 August 2018 (UTC)