Talk:Oregon (Awake)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: TRLIJC19 (talk · contribs) 22:29, 30 June 2012 (UTC)

 Doing.... TRLIJC19 (talk) 22:29, 30 June 2012 (UTC)

• Any other picture for infobox? That is not very clear at all; barely visible; and it serves no purpose to the article; therefore failing the non-free use criteria. Get a new clearer pic and expand rationale, or delete.
  •  Done
• Plot is very long; and condense to maybe three paragraphs.
  •  Done. Mainly
• Last sentence of ratings is unreferenced.
  •  Done
• The note about running time is unnecessary.
  •  Not done. That's why there is an option. Also used on other GAs on the Awake subject.
    • Y TRLIJC19 (talk) 22:52, 30 June 2012 (UTC)
• In the lead, don't link episode IMO.
  •  Done
• Why is the international broadcast info only mentioned in the lead? Per WP:LEAD, everything in the lead should be mentioned in the article. Perhaps under production?
  •  Not done. It is in the Ratings area. No guideline has been violated.
    • My bad, must have missed that. TRLIJC19 (talk) 22:52, 30 June 2012 (UTC)
• Fix the dablinks.
  •  Done

Overall, good job; on hold. TRLIJC19 (talk) 22:44, 30 June 2012 (UTC)

Thanks for the review. I have fixed issues, and think it is ready for GA. TBrandley 23:46, 30 June 2012 (UTC)

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