Talk:Oregon Occupational Safety and Health Division

Latest comment: 15 years ago by Katr67 in topic Building a better article

Building a better article

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This article was in pretty bad shape, but contained a fair amount of info -- see this revision: [1]

Now a new editor has rewritten it, including several references that are neither inline nor online. So the article still needs a fair amount of work.

Is there cited info from the previous article that should be incorporated? Govmatters, can you add your citations inline with the new text you've added? -Pete (talk) 23:21, 27 May 2009 (UTC)Reply

Hey Pete, I just did some cleanup--I was going to drop a note at WP:ORE... Katr67 (talk) 23:32, 27 May 2009 (UTC)Reply
Eeeee! This article is off the deep end with a distorted emphasis on the agency's administrative point of view. It really ought to focus on the external work it is supposed to do. Further reading is excessive and there is a sentence with four citations! —EncMstr (talk) 00:41, 28 May 2009 (UTC)Reply
I agree it needs work. FWIW, these are changes I made, including moving the pile of unfootnoted "notes and references" to a "Further reading" section and turning embedded titled external links into refs, as is my wont. Katr67 (talk) 13:28, 28 May 2009 (UTC)Reply