Talk:Orijen

Request to edit: COI

As this entry has been contested many times, we (the company I represent, Champion Petfoods) suggest an informational edit that we have tried to keep as neutral as possible. I would appreciate the editors' consideration.

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Orijen is a premium brand of dog food and cat food manufactured in Alberta, Canada and Kentucky by Champion Petfoods. Founded in 1985 by Reinhard Muhlenfeld, Orijen pet foods are currently sold in 70 countries.[citation needed] Varieties There are ten varieties - seven dog and three cat dry food formulas. Puppy Puppy Large Adult Dog 6 Fish Dog Regional Red Dog Tundra Senior Dog Cat & Kitten 6 Fish Cat Regional Red Cat They also make three varieties of Freeze-Dried Foods and thirteen varieties of Freeze-Dried treats - eight dog and five cat. Sale to Mars foods In 2023 the Mars pet food company is buying out Champion, the parent company of Orijen.

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==History== Champion Petfoods first launched in 1985 in Barrhead, Alberta, Canada by Reinhard Muhlenfeld . That same year, the company launched its first premium pet food, ACANA . In 2005, Muhlenfeld’s son, Peter, introduced ORIJEN, another premium pet food, because he wanted to make specialized food for his dachshund . Champion Petfoods produced all of its pet food products in Canada until 2016, when they expanded to Auburn, Kentucky . In 2023, the company was purchased by Mars, Inc. ==Products== ORIJEN pet food includes dry food, canned wet food, and treats for both cats and dogs. The brand operates two kitchens—one in Alberta, Canada, and another in Kentucky, USA. According to the brand’s website, ORIJEN dog food products contain a minimum of 85% animal ingredients ORIJEN dog and cat food products are developed using WholePrey-inspired formulas, meaning they incorporate meats, organs, and bone to reflect the natural diet. The dry foods are made with up to 90% animal ingredients and the wet foods are made with roughly 95% animal ingredients. The brand’s dog and cat foods also incorporate fruits, vegetables, and botanicals – typically accounting for 5% to 15% of the ingredients in its recipes<refhttps://wagwalking.com/product-guides/reviews/dog-food/orijen-dog-food</ref>

Tilly4ChampionPetfoods (talk) 09:43, 19 September 2023 (UTC) Tilly4ChampionPetfoods (talk) 09:43, 19 September 2023 (UTC)

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Reply 19-SEP-2023

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• Your edit request could not be reviewed because the provided references are not formatted correctly. The citation style predominantly used by the Orijen article is Citation Style 1 (CS1). The citation style used in the edit request consists of bare URL's. Any requested edit of yours which may be implemented will need to resemble the current style already in use in the article – in this case, CS1. (See WP:CITEVAR.) In the extended section below titled Citation style, I have illustrated two examples: one showing how the edit request was submitted, and another showing how requests should be submitted in the future:

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Bare URL reference formatting: The Sun's diameter is 864,337 miles, while the Moon's diameter is 2,159 miles. The Sun's temperature is 5,778 Kelvin. References 1. https://www.booksource.com 2. http://www.journalsource.com 3. http://www.websource.com In the example above there are three URL's provided with the claim statements, but these URL's have not been placed using Citation Style 1, which is the style predominantly used by the Orijen article. Using this style, the WikiFormatted text should resemble the following: Citation Style 1 formatting: The Sun's diameter is 864,337 miles,<ref>{{cite book|last1=Sjöblad|first1=Tristan|title=The Sun|url=http://www.booksource.com|publisher=Academic Press|date=2020|page=1}}</ref> while the Moon's diameter is 2,159 miles.<ref>{{cite journal|last1=Harinath|first1=Prisha|title=Size of the Moon|journal=Science|issue=78|volume=51|url=http://www.journalsource.com|date=2020|page=46}}</ref> The Sun's temperature is 5,778 Kelvin.<ref>{{cite web|last1=Uemura|first1=Shu|title=The Sun's Heat|url=http://www.websource.com|publisher=Academic Press|date=2020|page=2}}</ref> Which displays as: The Sun's diameter is 864,337 miles, while the Moon's diameter is 2,159 miles. The Sun's temperature is 5,778 Kelvin. References In the example above the references have been formatted according to Citation Style 1, which shows the author, the source's name, date, etc., all information which is lost when only the links are provided. As Wikipedia is a volunteer project, edit requests such as yours are generally expected to have this formatting done before the request is submitted for review.

Kindly submit a new edit request below at your earliest convenience, taking care to ensure that it makes use of CS1. If you have any questions about this formatting please don't hesitate to ask myself or another editor. Regards,  Spintendo  17:29, 19 September 2023 (UTC)

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Retry: request to edit, COI

@spintendo I am genuinely doing my best but I don't understand a lot of your requests. I am not a savvy Wiki user, so I am not familiar with a lot of the verbiage and tools. I have done what you requested to the best of my ability. I would appreciate your consideration.

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Orijen is a premium brand of dog food and cat food manufactured in Alberta, Canada and Kentucky by Champion Petfoods. Founded in 1985 by Reinhard Muhlenfeld, Orijen pet foods are currently sold in 70 countries.[citation needed] Varieties There are ten varieties - seven dog and three cat dry food formulas. Puppy Puppy Large Adult Dog 6 Fish Dog Regional Red Dog Tundra Senior Dog Cat & Kitten 6 Fish Cat Regional Red Cat They also make three varieties of Freeze-Dried Foods and thirteen varieties of Freeze-Dried treats - eight dog and five cat. Sale to Mars foods In 2023 the Mars pet food company is buying out Champion, the parent company of Orijen.

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History

Champion Petfoods first launched in 1985 in Barrhead, Alberta, Canada by Reinhard Muhlenfeld . That same year, the company launched its first premium pet food, ACANA . In 2005, Muhlenfeld’s son, Peter, introduced ORIJEN, another premium pet food, because he wanted to make specialized food for his dachshund . Champion Petfoods produced all of its pet food products in Canada until 2016, when they expanded to Auburn, Kentucky . In 2023, the company was purchased by Mars, Inc..

Products

ORIJEN pet food includes dry food, canned wet food, and treats for both cats and dogs. The brand operates two kitchens—one in Alberta, Canada, and another in Kentucky, USA. According to the brand’s website, ORIJEN dog food products contain a minimum of 85% animal ingredients . ORIJEN dog and cat food products are developed using WholePrey-inspired formulas, meaning they incorporate meats, organs, and bone to reflect the natural diet. The dry foods are made with up to 90% animal ingredients and the wet foods are made with roughly 95% animal ingredients . The brand’s dog and cat foods also incorporate fruits, vegetables, and botanicals – typically accounting for 5% to 15% of the ingredients in its recipes . }} Tilly4ChampionPetfoods (talk) 07:07, 20 September 2023 (UTC)

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@Tilly4ChampionPetfoods I am genuinely doing my best but I don't understand a lot of your requests. Thank you for your reply. I understand that you're having difficulty with the formatting, and I tried to make my earlier response as clear as possible. I provided you with examples of the way you submitted your request and the way the request should be submitted in the future. The references that you supplied in your request need to be formatted as they are in the article. I can point you to help pages that can increase your knowledge of formatting, but as Wikipedia is a volunteer project, the understanding of formatting generally needs to be garnered before using the edit request process. Please advise on how you'd like to proceed. Regards,  Spintendo  08:53, 20 September 2023 (UTC)

@Spintendo

I have updated the request above. Please let me know if this works. 12:41, 20 September 2023 (UTC) Tilly4ChampionPetfoods (talk) 12:41, 20 September 2023 (UTC)

I've revised your formatting so that the improved references are visible (thank you for updating them). Let's go over the other issues I see with this text:

1. The information itself seems to be more complete than the existing text in the article. That is a good thing. However, the sources need to be improved upon. The sources Wag!, Cats.com and Gray.com are not the best to use with Wikipedia. The claims in particular, that " ORIJEN dog food products contain a minimum of 85% animal ingredients" and "The brand’s dog and cat foods also incorporate fruits, vegetables, and botanicals – typically accounting for 5% to 15% of the ingredients in its recipes" are what we would call exceptional claims in that they would require exceptional sources to back them up. Currently, the sources provided are to the company itself or to the other two websites I mentioned, which are not reliable, secondary sources.
2. The claims which are acceptable to add using company sources, such as those claims which only state important company dates and milestones, can be included in the article. However, it would be helpful if these claims had Wikilinks added to the text. Wikilinks are links to other existing Wikipedia pages which help contextualize the information for Wikipedia's readers. For example, the claim "In 2023, the company was purchased by Mars, Inc" would benefit from having the word Mars inc Wikilinked- like this (Mars, Incorporated). My advice would be to review your proposed text to ensure that any company Wikilinks are added, as well as ensuring that exceptional claims have exceptional secondary sources. If you have any questions about this, please don't hesitate to ask on my talk page. Regards,  Spintendo  22:45, 22 September 2023 (UTC)

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COI edit request: Revised

This revised suggestion includes verifiable information from our brand websites when appropriate, and third party sources when they are available. For the editors' consideration.

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Orijen is a premium brand of dog food and cat food manufactured in Alberta, Canada and Kentucky by Champion Petfoods. Founded in 1985 by Reinhard Muhlenfeld, Orijen pet foods are currently sold in 70 countries.[citation needed] Varieties There are ten varieties - seven dog and three cat dry food formulas. Puppy Puppy Large Adult Dog 6 Fish Dog Regional Red Dog Tundra Senior Dog Cat & Kitten 6 Fish Cat Regional Red Cat They also make three varieties of Freeze-Dried Foods and thirteen varieties of Freeze-Dried treats - eight dog and five cat. Sale to Mars foods In 2023 the Mars pet food company is buying out Champion, the parent company of Orijen

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==History== Champion Petfoods first launched in 1985 in Barrhead, [[Alberta]], Canada by Reinhard Muhlenfeld . That same year, the company launched its first premium pet food, ACANA. In 2005, the company introduced it's super premium dog food, ORIJEN, in 2005. Reinhard Muhlenfeld’s son, Peter, became VP Sales at the company in 1997, and has taken over his father's legacy. . Champion Petfoods produced all of its pet food products in Canada until 2016, when they expanded to Auburn, Kentucky4. In 2023, the company was purchased by [[Mars, Incorporated]], Inc.<ef><cite class="citation web cs1">[https://www.mars.com/news-and-stories/press-releases-statements/mars-petcare-completes-acquisition-of-champion-petfoods "Mars Petcare completes acquisition of Champion Petfoods"]. ''Mars.com''. Mars.com. 02/28/23<span class="reference-accessdate">. Retrieved 10/09/23</span>. <q>Mars Petcare, part of Mars, Incorporated, today announced that it has completed its previously announced acquisition of Champion Petfoods</q></cite><span title="ctx_ver=Z39.88-2004&rft_val_fmt=info%3Aofi%2Ffmt%3Akev%3Amtx%3Ajournal&rft.genre=unknown&rft.jtitle=Mars.com&rft.atitle=Mars+Petcare+completes+acquisition+of+Champion+Petfoods&rft_id=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.mars.com%2Fnews-and-stories%2Fpress-releases-statements%2Fmars-petcare-completes-acquisition-of-champion-petfoods&rfr_id=info%3Asid%2Fen.wikipedia.org%3ATalk%3AOrijen" class="Z3988"></span> <span class="cs1-visible-error citation-comment"><code class="cs1-code">{{[[Template:cite web|cite web]]}}</code>: </span><span class="cs1-visible-error citation-comment">Check date values in: <code class="cs1-code">|access-date=</code> and <code class="cs1-code">|date=</code> ([[Help:CS1 errors#bad_date|help]])</span></ref> ==Varieties== There are ten varieties - seven dog and three cat dry food formulas. Puppy Puppy Large Adult Dog 6 Fish Dog Regional Red Dog Tundra Senior Dog Cat & Kitten 6 Fish Cat Regional Red Cat They also make three varieties of Freeze-Dried Foods and thirteen varieties of Freeze-Dried treats - eight dog and five cat.

Tilly4ChampionPetfoods (talk) 13:31, 9 October 2023 (UTC)

My apologies, the advice I gave above about preferred references to use with company information/important milestones was predicated on a possibly misinformed impression that Orijen was a company itself and not a brand of pet food. If that isn't the case, the proposed text about the company's inception, its leadership changes, and the currently existing information about the sale to Mars Incorporated arguably does not seem relevant to this article. If there is no Wikipedia article on Champion Petfoods itself, then placing some of this proposed text from the edit request seems like trying to get in the back door what won't fit in through the front. On the other side of the argument, if Champion Petfoods has been sold to Mars, then there would be no need for it having its own Wikipedia page — in which case, placing this information as a brief mention in the Orijen article might be relevant as an historical record of the brand itself. I need to consult with other editors about this before implementing any changes. Regards,  Spintendo  05:53, 10 October 2023 (UTC)

@Spintendo thank you for your consideration. To clarify, Champion is still an individual company within Mars. The company still exists as Champion Petfoods. ORIJEN is one of our two brands; the company and the other brand do not have Wikipedia entries. The history of the brand is the history of the company - the two cannot be separated. There is no need to create an entry for Champion, as most people are not familiar with the company, and we are ok with that. The ingredient and variety information also exists solely on the brand's website - please let me know if it is a valid source. Many thanks. Tilly4ChampionPetfoods (talk) 08:49, 10 October 2023 (UTC)

 Partly done The information about the company's foundation date (1985), who started the company (Muhlenfeld) and the year the brand Orijen was introduced were all placed and/or ensured to be in the article as an historical accounting of the brand. The Mars company was wikilinked. The varieties were omitted. Regards,  Spintendo  00:09, 11 October 2023 (UTC)