Talk:Orion-class battleship

Armour

• Belt armour is conventionally referred to as Vertical and Deck armour as Horizontal in Naval construction.The Dart (talk) 17:46, 22 September 2013 (UTC)
• A far better description of the armour can be found in the article on HMS Monarch (1911)

GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:Orion-class battleship/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 14:55, 16 March 2017 (UTC)

Comments

• No dab links Y, no dead links N, no copyvio Y.
• I would suggest removing the (RN) from "built for the Royal Navy (RN)", and then change the rest of the RNs to Royal Navy.
  • I don't think so.
• "The Orions were deemed obsolete by the end of the war in 1918 and" Suggest changing to: "The Orions were deemed obsolete by the end of the war, in 1918, and"
  • The year's not really a subordinate clause there.
• "A third dreadnought was added to the programme about April 1909" suggest changing about to around.
  • OK.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:33, 16 March 2017 (UTC)
• "On her way to the scrapyard, she ran aground, but was refloated and scrapped the following year." Is it known where she ran aground?
  • Added to the main body.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 17:29, 17 March 2017 (UTC)
• The supplement and Navy List links are dead.
  • They all check out fine for me using the check external links in the toolbox.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 17:29, 17 March 2017 (UTC)

When I try and open them from the article it gives me "ia700709.us.archive.org’s server DNS address could not be found." -- Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 19:38, 17 March 2017 (UTC)

They changed the links on me, but everything's updated.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 20:45, 17 March 2017 (UTC)

Passing now. -- Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 23:22, 17 March 2017 (UTC)