Talk:Ottoman conquest of Lesbos/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 23:44, 4 January 2018 (UTC)

I'll start this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 23:44, 4 January 2018 (UTC)

• No DABs, external links OK
• Images appropriately licensed.
• Needs a map
• to his wars with Hungary link to the specific war that you're referring to.
• Nicely done, a couple of typos that I fixed, but I'll make another pass later to see if anything else attracts my eye.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 20:22, 6 January 2018 (UTC)

Hi Sturmvogel 66, and as usual, thanks for taking the time (and welcome back, you were off site for some months, I hope everything is OK). Fixed the couple of points you raised, and added a map. I'd have preferred a more specific and detailed one, but there really isn't anything useable in Commons, and I am a bit short on time. Any further comments and suggestions, above and beyond GA requirements, are of course always welcome. Cheers, Constantine ✍ 20:41, 9 January 2018 (UTC)

• Good to be back.
• raiders who ravaged countryside missing word
• That's it on the second reading.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 23:06, 9 January 2018 (UTC)

Fixed, and good to have you back :). Constantine ✍ 08:31, 10 January 2018 (UTC)