Talk:Out Where the Buses Don't Run

Latest comment: 1 year ago by Bosundave in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 20:14, 26 September 2021 (UTC)Reply


Comments

  • " episode first aired on NBC on October 18, 1985. It featured" would merge, that first sentence is short.
    Done
  • "detectives James "Sonny" Crockett and" no need to pipe that, the article is actually at James "Sonny" Crockett!
    Done
  • "appearing in TV Guide's 1997" italics.
    Done
  • Could link "Vice" to Vice#Vice squad.
    Went with the redirect vice squad which points there
  • "début" no accent required, it's been adopted into English without.
    Force of habit as a filthy euro I guess. Removed.
  • "Forever".;[2]" some odd punctuation here.
    Got it, trimmed.
  • "Johnson would also direct" Johnston?
    Good spot, Johnson's whole different guy. Fixed.
  • "appeared in TV Guide's 1997" see above.
  • "for The A.V. Club, felt " our article has this in italics.
    Both italics fixed
  • "Sanders' book" Sanders's.
    I've rephrased this a bit to avoid s's which never sits right with me.
  • "Vice. The author describes" -> "Vice, in which he describes..."
    Done
  • ISBNs could be consistently formatted.
    Got it, I'm not sure if the current format is right (I'm never sure of these) but it's consistent

That's about it. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 08:26, 1 October 2021 (UTC)Reply