Talk:Outram Park MRT station

Latest comment: 1 year ago by AirshipJungleman29 in topic Did you know nomination
Former featured article candidateOutram Park MRT station is a former featured article candidate. Please view the links under Article milestones below to see why the nomination was archived. For older candidates, please check the archive.
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Did You Know Article milestones
DateProcessResult
July 11, 2023Good article nomineeListed
July 27, 2023Peer reviewReviewed
September 18, 2023Guild of Copy EditorsCopyedited
January 31, 2024Featured article candidateNot promoted
Did You Know A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on August 16, 2023.
The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that an artwork in Singapore's Outram Park MRT station represents the state of mind of commuters through 69 engravings of surreal human forms?
Current status: Former featured article candidate, current good article

Map

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Do you guys think that the map located at http://www.sbstransit.com.sg/nel/img/NE3_big.jpg is a better one compared than the map shown here? Because the EW-line part of the station map appears to be missing from the LTA picture. unkx80 10:19, 18 October 2006 (UTC)Reply

Fair use rationale for Image:NS logo.jpg

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Fair use rationale for Image:OutramMRT surroundings.JPG

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GA Review

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The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.


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Reviewer: Voorts (talk · contribs) 14:03, 2 July 2023 (UTC)Reply

GA Review: First assessment

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Review forthcoming. voorts (talk/contributions) 14:03, 2 July 2023 (UTC)Reply
First assessment completed. Placing the review on hold for the nominator to fix the issues noted below. voorts (talk/contributions) 15:35, 2 July 2023 (UTC)Reply

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a. (prose, spelling, and grammar):  
    Copy edit completed by reviewer.
    b. (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
    Copy edit completed by reviewer.
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a. (reference section):  
    Although this passes under the GA guidelines, some of the citations can (and should) be cleaned up by using citation templates.
    b. (citations to reliable sources):  
    Several of the sources cited are not RS because they are primary sources. Additionally, tThe "Services" subsection links to a dynamic map of the MRT system; is there a way to link to a stable version (e.g., a PDF timetable)? Additionally, I noted one {{failed verification}} in the article. See discussion below. voorts (talk/contributions) 00:28, 4 July 2023 (UTC)Reply
    c. (OR):  
    As noted, several of the sources are primary sources. See discussion below. voorts (talk/contributions) 00:28, 4 July 2023 (UTC)Reply
    d. (copyvio and plagiarism):  
    Checked using Earwig's tool.
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a. (major aspects):  
    b. (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
    Checked edit history and talk page.
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):  
    Checked copyright tags.
    b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
    Images are informative.
  7. Overall:
    Pass/fail:  

(Criteria marked   are unassessed)

Discussion after first assessment

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Creating this section to discuss the initial assessment and any edits made to fix up the article. voorts (talk/contributions) 15:35, 2 July 2023 (UTC)Reply

On reflection, I think the sources cited above meet WP:PRIMARY because "A primary source may be used on Wikipedia only to make straightforward, descriptive statements of facts that can be verified by any educated person with access to the primary source but without further, specialized knowledge". However, upon reviewing the sources, several of the statements in the article appear to be WP:SYNTH or not substantiated by the source cited. For example, the article states,"On 29 August 2012, the Land Transport Authority (LTA) announced that Outram Park station would interchange with the proposed Thomson Line", and cites to [1]. That source, however, does not say anything about the Outram Park station. I've marked some additional failed verifications in the article. Finally, the art section should definitely have nonprimary sources as sources by the Metro system are biased. Has anyone reviewed the murals or other art projects? voorts (talk/contributions) 00:18, 4 July 2023 (UTC)Reply

Courtesy ping to @Brachy0008. voorts (talk/contributions) 00:20, 4 July 2023 (UTC)Reply
I don’t think so, but I found a non-primary source and I’m not really sure if it should be added [1] (It’s FourSquare.com) Brachy08 (Talk)(Contribs) 00:26, 4 July 2023 (UTC)Reply
No, per WP:UGC. voorts (talk/contributions) 00:29, 4 July 2023 (UTC)Reply
ok Brachy08 (Talk)(Contribs) 03:46, 6 July 2023 (UTC)Reply
I solved all the issues I could find. Is there any more? Brachy08 (Talk)(Contribs) 08:00, 6 July 2023 (UTC)Reply
Can you find a non-primary source about Mata Mata? voorts (talk/contributions) 21:29, 6 July 2023 (UTC)Reply
I can’t. I’ll delete it anyway. Brachy08 (Talk)(Contribs) 01:12, 11 July 2023 (UTC)Reply
Thank you. I will pass the article. voorts (talk/contributions) 01:17, 11 July 2023 (UTC)Reply
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Did you know nomination

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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by AirshipJungleman29 (talk10:33, 8 August 2023 (UTC)Reply

 
North East line platforms of Outram Park MRT station

Improved to Good Article status by Brachy0008 (talk). Self-nominated at 04:29, 12 July 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Outram Park MRT station; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.Reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems

Hook eligibility:

  • Cited:  
  • Interesting:   - n
Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
QPQ: None required.

Overall:   @Brachy0008: Good article, but I dont find the hook all that interesting. That's probably due to me being an American but I feel as if a different hook should be proposed. Onegreatjoke (talk) 21:15, 13 July 2023 (UTC)Reply

ALT1 ... that one of the artwork pieces of Singapore's Outram Park MRT station features themes on Chinese opera, law, and medicine?
ALT2 ... that one of the artwork pieces of Singapore's Outram Park MRT station features 69 engravings of surreal human forms, which are intended to represent the state of mind of commuters?
@Brachy0008 and Onegreatjoke: How do these sound? Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 12:05, 14 July 2023 (UTC)Reply
ALT2 is interesting. Brachy08 (Talk)(Contribs) 05:39, 15 July 2023 (UTC)Reply
  I think those are fine. Onegreatjoke (talk) 16:52, 16 July 2023 (UTC)Reply
@Onegreatjoke: Ready to approve the article? Brachy08 (Talk)(Contribs) 06:19, 19 July 2023 (UTC)Reply
I did? Onegreatjoke (talk) 16:14, 19 July 2023 (UTC)Reply
I wasn't notified? Brachy08 (Talk)(Contribs) 09:41, 20 July 2023 (UTC)Reply
It isn't on DYK yet though (Courtesy ping to @Onegreatjoke: Brachy08 (Talk)(Contribs) 09:54, 22 July 2023 (UTC)Reply
I approved it. It just hasn't been promoted yet. Onegreatjoke (talk) 18:56, 24 July 2023 (UTC)Reply