Talk:Ovda Regio

Latest comment: 9 years ago by Mangolava in topic Samantha

Feedback from Rob

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Nice work. I would add a map of Venus and locate Ovda Regio on it. This may work better as the main image at the top right, as I feel your current one might be better suited for one of the other sections. Also, if you are going to refer to Ovda as a "Regio" in other parts of your text, it would be good to define exactly what a Regio is (is it specifically a crustal plateau?). A few grammatical errors but other than that looks great! Robnarmour1018 (talk) 00:31, 31 March 2015 (UTC)Reply

Shelby

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There are quite a few grammatical issues here, but those are pretty easy to fix. The entire last half of your page is pretty much what was already on my page.

Samantha

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Not bad. I still see some grammatical issues, but your page does include nice imagery. I wonder if it would be redundant to include models on your page even though they would be the same as Shelby's models. I agree with Rob about possibly putting another image to better showcase the location of the Ovda Region. Otherwise, nice page. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Mangolava (talkcontribs) 10:09, 31 March 2015 (UTC)Reply