Talk:PL-3

Latest comment: 12 years ago by Frecklefoot in topic Opening sentence

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Opening sentence

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The opening sentence is supposed to be a statement that can easily be digested by the "average reader". I'm a software engineer, and even I can't understand what this article is supposed to be about. Someone familiar with the content, please rework the opening sentence so it's easier to grasp. If you have to dumb it down, that's fine. — Frεcklεfσσt | Talk 15:42, 15 June 2012 (UTC)Reply

I took a stab at it. If it's not technically correct, feel free to fix it. But please don't revert to previous version. That was terrible. — Frεcklεfσσt | Talk 15:58, 15 June 2012 (UTC)Reply