Talk:PZL.43

Latest comment: 12 years ago by Piotrus in topic B-class review

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I've rewritten the article to meet the grammatical criticism whilst sticking close to the original content. Hope that's OK: the intention was just to get rid of that nasty header! There were one or two places where I was not quite sure of the meaning, so it could do will a careful read through by someone who can access the Polish sources. I don't think the numbers quite add up: don't know if that is my reading or if they never did. I also moved stuff from the unusual technical detail section to Design & Development, in line with our standard practice I think, and some material from there into Operational History. This revealed a little repetition which I removed about the Polish squadron deployment. I'm fairly sure that nothing has been lost.

There is a PZL.43B mentioned in the variants list, but not in text. Is there more to say?

Sometime I'll add an English language reference (Jane's AWA) for those who don't have the Polish and add the alternative units unless anyone else wants to do it.TSRL (talk) 13:29, 2 December 2008 (UTC)Reply

B-class review

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This article is currently at start/C class, but could be improved to B-class if it had more (inline) citations.--Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| talk to me 00:11, 11 May 2012 (UTC)Reply