Talk:Pablo Sandoval/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: TheQ Editor (talk · contribs) 15:13, 10 October 2014 (UTC)

Looks good on first glance. Looking forward to reviewing this.  ΤheQ Editor  ^Talk? 15:13, 10 October 2014 (UTC)

Thanks! I have been too busy to work on new articles lately, but I will have plenty of time to polish this one up. Sanfranciscogiants17 (talk) 21:10, 12 October 2014 (UTC)

@Sanfranciscogiants17: Apparently, the link to Kung Fu Panda was already removed when I was reviewing it, so you didn't need to add it. I removed it again, unless there were reasons why he was nicknamed Kung Fu Panda. Thanks,  ΤheQ Editor  ^Talk? 13:46, 18 October 2014 (UTC)

IMPORTANT - Please refer to this permanent link when talking about references.

• Lead barely has any info on Early Life and Personal Life.
• no need to link to Kung Fu Panda
• The caption for the infobox picture needs a period.
• "but he did not show up for two weeks" sounds like the scout came after two weeks. how about dropping the "for two weeks"?
• the caption for the picture needs a period.
• the third paragraph of 2009 is too short per GA requirements, perhaps merging it into another paragraph.
• in May Sandoval - punctuation
• months after - specify
• File:Pablo Sandoval, 2012 World Series parade.jpg needs a period