Talk:Pac-Land/GA1
Latest comment: 5 years ago by Abryn in topic GA Review
GA Review
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Reviewer: Abryn (talk · contribs) 07:01, 9 September 2019 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section):
b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
- a (reference section):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
- Could you please update the infobox image's fair use information? Possibly provide a source.
- Isn't it a bit weird to call Sue a new ghost when she first appeared in Ms. Pac-Man?
- Atari Lynx manual does not clarify that the Power Pellet works in a similar fashion to the original Pac-Man.
- I dunno if the line about ghosts in vehicles is really that valuable.
- Gonna disagree with this statement. Ghosts in vehicles will drop miniature ghosts to try and hit Pac-Man, which I think is worth noting in the article. Namcokid47 (talk) 23:05, 9 September 2019 (UTC)
- "Most trip sections end with a large sign saying "BREAK TIME" — jumping at certain points at the end of each section will award the player with bonus points." - This feels extraneous. At least cutting out the bonus point detail would be a good idea, I think. In general that certain objects give points feels like a detail that could be culled.
- Looking at it, the source doesn't seem to corroborate the notion that the designer is known for Family Stadium.
- Unless I'm misunderstanding, I can't seem to find in the source that describes Track & Field or explains the inspiration.
- It's in the source. Page 207. Namcokid47 (talk) 23:05, 9 September 2019 (UTC)
- The article does not explain what "location testing" means. Should use something more obvious, like saying that it was tested in Yokohama. Also, link to Yokohama.
- The regional art style differences is explained in both Gameplay and Development sections.
- I believe I've fixed all of these. Namcokid47 (talk) 03:14, 12 September 2019 (UTC)
- Nice job. - Bryn (talk) (contributions) 05:24, 12 September 2019 (UTC)
- I believe I've fixed all of these. Namcokid47 (talk) 03:14, 12 September 2019 (UTC)