Talk:Pakistan at the 2018 Winter Olympics/GA1

Latest comment: 6 years ago by MWright96 in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 08:30, 11 July 2018 (UTC)Reply

Going to review this article. MWright96 (talk) 08:30, 11 July 2018 (UTC)Reply

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  

Background

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Alpine skiing

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  • Add a link to 2014 Winter Olympics in the words 2014 Olympics in Sochi
  • "He said he was not able to train much in Pakistan due to lack of snow." - due to a lack of snow.
  • "Karim competed in the slalom event," - Karim also competed in the slalom event,

Cross-country skiing

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  • The wikilink for Winter Olympics should be in the background section
  • "Human is Kirim' nephew." - Kirim's
  • "Human is in the Pakistani army in addition to his participation on the national skiing team. The Ski Federation of Pakistan founded a school in his village, the same village Abbas is from. He began training internationally in 2010–2011." - Source?, also the last sentence here should read He began training internationally around 2010 and 2011. or something similar
  • "the same village Abbas is from." - change the word in bold to place to avoid close repetition
  • "For these Olympics, he spent time training in Turkey and Finland, along with some time he spent in Korea prior to the event." - change to For these Olympics, Human spent time training in Turkey and Finland, and also travelled to Korea prior to the event.

References

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  • Reference 1 is missing the author who wrote it
  • The publisher in Referneces 7 & 8 needs to be in the work field and italized since it is a print publication
  • Also, the work in Reference 8 should be The News International instead of The News

Will put this review on hold to allow the nominator to take some time to read the suggestions I have raised above. MWright96 (talk) 20:18, 11 July 2018 (UTC)Reply

@MWright96: I have addressed your concerns above. Kees08 (Talk) 03:29, 12 July 2018 (UTC)Reply