Talk:Palmer College of Chiropractic

Reorganizing and editing the article

I am a UW-Eau Claire student working on a English class project to contribute to a Wikipedia article. I think I was supposed to comment on this page (the talk page) for feedback from other users before I actually did my changes on this page - so I think I am posting this late. For my project, I noticed that on the Palmer College of Chiropractic page a user on June 2013 wrote on the page that this article needs to fix the introduction because it is too long for overall article length and relies too much on resources to primary sources- this page contains an exclamation point on page. Based on the comments from the user on June 2013, I made the introduction shorter by formatting the information, already on the page, differently. I added a history section where I copied information from the introduction and pasted it to this section. I also made another new section titled Palmer College of Chiropractic campuses. Again, I copied information from the introduction and pasted it to this new section. I also made the campus sections (titled Davenport campus, Florida campus, and West campus) as subsections of Palmer College of Chiropractic campuses section. This made the introduction shorter.

I also noticed that on this page there is a need, in my opinion, to get rid of “who is known by [whom?]". Another minor edit I made was getting rid of "who is known by [whom?]" to "who is..." that way the problem of known by whom? disappears. ZsoftballZ20 (talk) 21:08, 8 December 2014 (UTC)

Adding New Sections

I am a UW-Eau Claire student working on a English class project to contribute to a Wikipedia article. I would like feedback on adding a section of Palmer College of Chiropractic's mission statement, accreditation section, athletic section, and Clinic section.ZsoftballZ20 (talk) 01:47, 11 December 2014 (UTC)