Talk:Papa's Cabin/GA1
Latest comment: 8 years ago by Miyagawa in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Miyagawa (talk · contribs) 18:00, 27 January 2016 (UTC)
Grabbing this for a future review. Miyagawa (talk) 18:00, 27 January 2016 (UTC)
- "Despite the fact that Hank Landry is a prime suspect for Keith, he reassures Veronica that she can still be his protégé." I'm unsure whether the "he" is Landry or Keith telling her.
- Production: James Jordan needs a closing bracket.
- Reviews: "Eric Goldman of IGN rated the episode an 8.2 out of 10, indicating that it was "great"." - needs an immediate citation due to the quote
- Likewise the following sentence.
- meaning that it "fell in line with the feel of the show." also
- Same for "Veronica Mars's weakest mystery," and "a solid resolution to the Dean O'Dell mystery"
- Image rights are good.
- References are fine.
That's the lot I think. Miyagawa (talk) 19:31, 29 January 2016 (UTC)
- @Miyagawa: I have responded to your comments, and let me know if there's anything else I can do. :) Johanna(talk to me!) 22:34, 29 January 2016 (UTC)
- @Johanna: Thanks, that all looks good to me now. Happy to promote. Miyagawa (talk) 22:36, 29 January 2016 (UTC)