Talk:Partenope-class cruiser/GA1

Latest comment: 8 years ago by Parsecboy in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 15:59, 20 June 2016 (UTC)Reply

  • No DABs, external links OK
  • Images appropriately licensed.
  • Capitalize torpedo cruiser in the infobox
    • Done
  • Suggest that you use ftin rather than decimal feet.
    • Fixed
  • Watch your rounding; 450 mm isn't 18 inches.
    • Fixed
  • Link displaced, fore-and-aft rig
    • Done
  • triple-expansion steam engines each driving a single comma after engines
    • Fixed
  • Explain the /43 nomenclature
    • Fixed
  • revised significantly, to a pair awkward
    • See if the current wording is better
  • 4th Division at the time but did not comma after time
    • Added.
  • Any mention of further activities in the articles on the war in Adriatic in the last two Warships?