Talk:Partners & Napier/Archives/2019

Latest comment: 5 years ago by Spintendo in topic Review and updates


Review and updates

Hello, Wiki editors, I noticed that the Partners + Napier company page has outdated information. Would like to respectfully work through an editor and follow proper process to have this updated with neutral factual changes only. I've listed requested changes and cited sources through 3rd party media coverage, etc. Appreciate the help and any feedback. Regards, Gregg

Here is the Wiki page https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Partners_and_Napier

Requests for review: 1- first sentence remove jargon "ideas agency" and replace with "advertising agency" 2- add "employing over 160 people" 3- add "Headquarters in the Metropolitan building in downtown Rochester, NY" (firm recently moved) 4- add "The 40,000 square foot office is organized into “neighborhoods” that house groups working on the agency’s three largest client fields — food and drink, health and wellness and technology."

All requests above are directly cited in 3/23/19 Democrat and Chronicle article here:https://www.democratandchronicle.com/story/money/business/2019/03/23/partners-napier-moves-over-160-employees-into-new-metropolitan-space/3246036002/ — Preceding unsigned comment added by GreggDinino (talkcontribs) 22:17, 30 April 2019 (UTC)

Reply 01-MAY-2019

   Edit request partially implemented  

  •  Y The company being an advertising agency was added to the lead sentence.
  •  N Information on the change of office locations within the same city is arguably less noteworthy than say, the address itself, which is typically placed in the infobox under the |location= parameter. The previous office's physical address had not been noted. If this is to be the case, please provide the newer address so that it may be placed in the infobox.

  Additional changes made:

  1. The awards were omitted. The single award which was WikiLinked was to an article whose notability has been questioned. The other award was not independently notable in Wikipedia.

Regards,  Spintendo  12:25, 1 May 2019 (UTC)