Talk:Paul Conway (butcher)
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Failed GA
editGA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
This article needs a bit of an expansion and an overhaul for the article. The other thing is that I am dubious about whether he meets notability standards, given that he only has 25 staff and has a turnover of about 1 million pounds. A real estate agent who sells 10 houses in Australia would have that much turnover
- Is it reasonably well written?
- A. Prose quality:
- B. MoS compliance:
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- Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
- A. References to sources:
- B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
- C. No original research:
- A. References to sources:
- Is it broad in its coverage?
- A. Major aspects:
- B. Focused:
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- Is it neutral?
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- Is it stable?
- No edit wars, etc:
- No edit wars, etc:
- Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
- A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
- B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
- Not applicable, there are none
- A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
- Overall:
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- References are missing from some one sentence paragraphs
- Paragraphs should consist of more than one sentence. Please combine and integrate the one sentence paras or expand the article
- In general the article is very short - 2.5k of main prose. From the listed refs, there seems to be more scope for expansion
- Refs need to be formatted properly with full details of publisher, dates , author, see {{cite news}} and {{cite web}}.
- I do not think the PSYBT is a reliable source since Conway is one of their awardwinners and does promotions for them, so in effect he is in a partnership with them
- Lead is supposed to be a wrap-up of the main body. At the moment, the lead is basically more than the main body itslef.
- Refs need to be directly after teh punctuation, not before it.
- "in this highly competitive business" need sources
- "with overall Scottish third place" not correct English
- There are commas missing throughout the article
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How on Earth is this notable enough for an article?
editIt's an obvious vanity page, how has this been allowed to stay up? Why isn't there a page for every butcher, baker, candlestick enthusiast etc. in Scotland?