Talk:Paul K. Carlton Jr.

Latest comment: 14 years ago by Proxy User in topic Reference improvements needed

Reference improvements needed

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This article currently has just one stated source, the official U.S. military bio for Paul K. Carlton, Jr. I see at least problems: 1.) the official U.S. military bios are slanted, in that they do not convey information that would reflect poorly on the military (compare the official bio of Frank Kelso, involved in the Tailhook scandal, vs. a better written wikipedia article on him using several other sources), and 2.) the article does not show which material is copied. Copied material should be in quotes (quotation marks or set in block quote formatting), to separate from wikipedia editor wording. See [[WP:REF}] Hence I mark this article with the "refimprove" and related tags. doncram (talk) 02:48, 20 January 2008 (UTC)Reply

I'm removing the "refimprove" and related tags since you issue is non-spacific to the Paul K. Carlton article in that you do not cite any particular or actual problem with the article itself. Proxy User (talk) 02:24, 10 December 2009 (UTC)Reply

WikiProject Military history/Assessment/Tag & Assess 2008

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Article reassessed and graded as start class. --dashiellx (talk) 20:02, 24 June 2008 (UTC)Reply