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B class review
editB class. The Night operations section is very long. Please consider adding 1 or 2 more section headers. Thanks. Djmaschek (talk) 04:08, 21 June 2021 (UTC)
GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 13:54, 6 September 2021 (UTC)
Comments
- "to Fighter Command and" link.
- Done. Zawed (talk) 10:32, 7 September 2021 (UTC)
- "the Blitz" link.
- Done. Zawed (talk) 10:32, 7 September 2021 (UTC)
- "intruder missions" what were they?
- I've linked this. Zawed (talk) 10:32, 7 September 2021 (UTC)
- "Christchurch in New Zealand' link ChCh.
- Done. Zawed (talk) 10:32, 7 September 2021 (UTC)
- "Territorial Force" link?
- Done. Zawed (talk) 10:32, 7 September 2021 (UTC)
- "pilot officer" link that rank.
- Done. Zawed (talk) 10:32, 7 September 2021 (UTC)
- "he Battle of France commenced " link.
- Done. Zawed (talk) 10:32, 7 September 2021 (UTC)
- "missions.[5][4]" ref order.
- Grrr, I'm usually a stickler for these. Fixed. Zawed (talk) 10:32, 7 September 2021 (UTC)
- "the Midlands" link.
- This is already linked, perhaps you missed the first mention. Zawed (talk) 10:32, 7 September 2021 (UTC)
- Link for Drem?
- This is already linked, ditto here. Zawed (talk) 10:32, 7 September 2021 (UTC)
- Body needs to make mention that he was considered a flying ace, that's only mentioned in the lead.
- Done, at the very end. Zawed (talk) 10:32, 7 September 2021 (UTC)
That's it for me. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 18:21, 6 September 2021 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review The Rambling Man, I have responded with these edits and comments above. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 10:32, 7 September 2021 (UTC)