Talk:Pavel Nedvěd/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Darrman (talk · contribs) 08:57, 3 June 2013 (UTC) Hello, I'm Darrman, and I'll try to review this, being the oldest in the backlog. Anyway, here we go!

Lead:Seems fine.

Club, Czech: More prestigious Try using a less POV term. Lazio: 1st paragraph, about winning the Coppa Itaila and getting to the final of the UEFA Cup needs a ref. In fact, the whole of the bottom of the first paragraph needs sourcing. Source needed for the Supercoppa Ititila wins. Sent off in the quarterfinal of the Italian Cup Consistency would help: there are people who might think the different language names are different cups! Rome-based outfit: Are Lazio from Rome? People might get confused. Juventus: He proved to be one of the few midfielders capable of assuming the playmaking role of his French predecessor. Seems positive bias. Also unsourced. Consider rewording/removing. Source the Scudetto wins. About being relegated, source the amount of goals. I'd personally recommend changing mentions of Juve to it's full name, people might be confused. Who's the Bianconeri? I added a link. Need ref about the goal against Florintina. Netted-scored. I know it's not the Simple Wikipedia, but less confusion. Source for that line. Ref for being subbed off in final Europe match. After retiring: A bit short. Try lengthening it.

I'll review the rest later. If you want me, contact me on my talk page. See you later, Darrman (talk) 08:57, 3 June 2013 (UTC).

Thanks for your observations. I have attempted to deal with all of these except for the reference for being subbed off in the final Europe match - that was already in the article. C679 14:38, 3 June 2013 (UTC)

Ok, I'm back. Now, to continue! International: Ref about starting out in youth teams. His big break came at the UEFA Euro 1996 tournament, where he was the driving force behind the Czechs' run to the final. Any way to make this less POV? Euro '96: Ref about missed goals and booking. Ref about early goal, change opening the scoring to something more simple. Ref the final score. Ref the Russia game. About the Portugal game, does the existing ref say who won? If so, merge the sentences. I might do that myself. The ref is paywalled! We need a new ref! Need a ref about German loss. Euro 2000: Might need ref about hitting the bar in first game. The team-mate's name mightn't be needed. Ref about being knocked out. Euro '04: instrumental Is this puffery? Is it not? I don't know. Two goals down after just 19 minutes, I think just should be removed. Ref needed for the appealed yellow card. Ref for the injury and sub off. World Cup '06: Ref about the first World Cup qualification since the Czechoslovak spilt. Ref about the US win. Is it possible to describe Nedved's performance against Ghana? It says nothing about that. If at all possible, could you put up the Euro '96, World Cup '98, Euro 2000, World Cup '02, Euro '04, and the World Cup '06 qualifiers? If it isn't part of WP:GA?, you'll need it for FA.

Play style: Very short, but all lines reffed. Personal life: Unreffed line! Find a ref for that line or we are in trouble! Sorry if I offended you. Anyway, it's a one line section. I'd probably just put it in the lead.

Stats: Insert note saying Apps means Appearances. It took me quite a while to figure that out. Fill in national cup stats and most Europe stats: the column is empty. In international goals, is it possible to mark if Nedved got a double in the match? If not already sourced, insert refs next to his trophies. Reuse the ref if one exists.

All right, that's done, so I hope you thought the review was good. If you have comments, use my talk page if you want to talk to me, or here if it's about the article. Anyway goodbye, Darrman (talk) 21:42, 3 June 2013 (UTC).

Mostly done. Hitting the bar in the first game (Euro 2000) was already referenced. Being instrumental in Euro 2004, I've left this in; he was man of the match (referenced), so I don't think it is puffery. I haven't added information about qualifying matches for international tournaments at this stage; I don't think this is a requirement for a GA, see for example Klaas-Jan Huntelaar. I've found references for all European matches (and added the stats) and also for the Coppa Italia matches with Juventus. However, despite being listed on the Spanish and Italian versions of this article, I have been unable to find a reliable source for older cup matches, so at this time they have not been added. I note the Good Article Jesper Blomqvist has spaces in the parts where statistics could not be obtained/verified. Thanks, C679 18:30, 4 June 2013 (UTC)

Ok, I see what you mean, it won't lose the GA if you can't get the info, so since you fulfilled all my problems, I'll pass this. Good job! Darrman (talk) 17:00, 7 June 2013 (UTC)