Talk:Perilous Realms/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: AryKun (talk · contribs) 17:04, 13 August 2023 (UTC)

Many thanks. Chiswick Chap (talk) 18:17, 13 August 2023 (UTC)

Good Article review progress box Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

• "won a Mythopoeic Award in 2008" You should mention the Category (Inklings' Studies).
  • Added.

• Might want to explain who William Morris is.
  • Glossed and linked.

• "He commented that...beheading challenge" How are these two clauses connected?
  • Glossed.

• "suspicious of high fantasy's ideology" Not really clear on what this means.
  • Reworded.

• Images are properly formatted and used.
  • Noted.

• The last ref has a formatting error.
  • Fixed.

• Spot-checks:
  • "Mythopoeic Awards 2008". Science Fiction Awards Database. Verify claims made.
  • Sullivan, C. W. III (5 September 2007). "[Review] Perilous Realms: Celtic and Norse in Tolkien's Middle-earth". Journal of Folklore Research. Verify claims made.
  • Noted.

• That's all I have.
  • Many thanks for the review. Chiswick Chap (talk) 14:43, 16 August 2023 (UTC)