Talk:Permeability (foundry sand)
Latest comment: 12 years ago by FoCuSandLeArN in topic rewriting
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Help needed to expand
editDue to time limit, i could do as much there on the page, please help me expand Warm regards Vertical.limit (talk) 15:02, 27 June 2009 (UTC)
rewriting
editthe article's tone, etc is not exactly encyclopaedic. the information is ok, but it needs to be written adequately. examples include: "And in other words, permeability is the property by which...". FoCuSandLeArN (talk) 13:51, 11 July 2012 (UTC)
- maybe an expert could write it in a proper manner. FoCuSandLeArN (talk) 13:53, 11 July 2012 (UTC)