Talk:Peru at the 2010 Winter Olympics

Latest comment: 6 years ago by MWright96 in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 07:12, 14 May 2018 (UTC)Reply

Going to take up this review. MWright96 (talk) 07:12, 14 May 2018 (UTC)Reply

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  

Background

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  • "and with the exception of the 1952 Helsinki Games has participated" - a comma is needed between "Games" and "has"

Alpine skiing

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  • "but she failed to finish" - completed to avoid reptition of closely spelt wording
  • "finishing the first run in a time of 59 seconds, but failing to finish the second run." - end again to avoid reptition

Cross-country skiing

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  • "and moving from Peru to Seattle, Washington" - sentence needs a period to complete it
  • "he finished with a time of 45 minutes and 53 seconds, finishing in 94th place out of 95 competitors." - placing 94th

References

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  • Reference 2 should have its publication and access dates should be written as 13 February 2010 and 24 July 2011 in line with the rest of the citations

That is all I found during my read-through. Like the other reviews, not too many issues are present. MWright96 (talk) 08:47, 14 May 2018 (UTC)Reply