Talk:Peter de Maulay/GA1

Latest comment: 8 years ago by Ealdgyth in topic GA Review

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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 06:11, 28 March 2016 (UTC)Reply

Hi! Will review this. Sainsf <^>Feel at home 06:11, 28 March 2016 (UTC)Reply

A well-written article. I have only a few comments to make: Sainsf <^>Feel at home 10:21, 28 March 2016 (UTC)Reply

  • In Early life:
  • where he soon became a close advisor of the king Add a citation at the end of this.
  • Can we add why exactly he should be an "evil" counsellor?
  • He married in 1214 Isabella Better write In 1214 he married Isabella
  • Thornham had died in 1211 How can the place die? Should this be "Robert" instead?
  • In Under Henry III:
  • Henry III is a duplicate link
  • which occurred on 17 May Add the year.
  • In Treason accusations:
  • In July Peter des Roches returned to England and in late July was instrumental in the clearing of Maulay from the charges of treason
  • In Upavon case:
  • Has Upavon been linked anywhere?
  • If you mean in this article, yes, it was linked in "Early life" when we discuss de Maulay receiving it. If you mean is there an article about the medieval dispute over Upavon, I'm not aware of any. (And it would be difficult to justify on GNG grounds) Ealdgyth - Talk 12:59, 28 March 2016 (UTC)Reply
  • Images: Are you sure we can use no images in the article? How about a image of Henry III?

That should be all. Good luck! Sainsf <^>Feel at home 10:21, 28 March 2016 (UTC)Reply

Thanks for the response Ealdgyth, I see no more issues with the article. This is ready for promotion. A fantastic job!