Talk:Phi Kappa Mu/Archive 1

Latest comment: 5 years ago by Curdigirl in topic 2019 - copy edit run
Archive 1

Page creation note

Currently updating the page to conform to Wikipedia Standards

2019 - copy edit run

Last update on this talk page was 10 years ago. Noting that I did a copy edit run and found it more review and cleanup. Issues:

  • Only one source provided
  • One source is cited three times, but many claims in the article are without citation
  • There are numerous peacock terms used throughout, with individuals being labeled as "eminent" or "Father of" without supporting RS material provided. I labeled examples of the peacock terms.

Thanks, Curdigirl (talk) 10:03, 4 November 2019 (UTC)

2021 - Recent Updates

Greetings, as a member of the Fraternity in question I have taken it upon myself to update certain details in the page while also attempting to resolve previous comments. Changelog so far

  • Added other references
  • Added more notable alumni, attempted to change the wording to prevent the use of peacock terminology
  • Added an entirely new section highlighting the Service Projects of the Fraternity

If there are any concerns or questions you are free to contact me here Ultimagnusv2 (talk) 7:19, 16 September 2021 (PST)