 | Philipp Grubauer is currently a Other sports good article nominee. Nominated by XR228 (talk) at 20:25, 24 November 2024 (UTC) Any editor who has not nominated or contributed significantly to this article may review it according to the good article criteria to decide whether or not to list it as a good article. To start the review process, click start review and save the page. (See here for the good article instructions.) Short description: German ice hockey player (born 1991) |
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A-class review
editI am nominating this article for A-class status because it meets all of the criteria. Feel free to give feedback. XR228 (talk) 01:05, 8 September 2024 (UTC)
HickoryOughtShirt?4 comments
edit- I would recommend archiving all the links in this article since the NHL lives to mess with their website so much.
- Since this isn't mentioned anywhere else in the article, there needs to be a source for his bday and birth place. I would typically add an early life section and add his bday, birthplace, and parents but if you cannot find enough information, I think it can be merged into early career.
- I think the line about his draft can just be merged into either the above or below paragraph. It looks a bit off by itself.
Grubauer played most of the 2014–15 season with Hershey....
I would add a bit more detail about how he did while with Hershey. In this article, it saysGrubauer went 27-17-5 (2.30 goals-against average, .921 save percentage, six shutouts) during the regular season and climbed to No. 7 in all-time Hershey shutouts (11) and No. 14 in all-time wins (55).
I would say these are some pretty impressive stats. I also don't see any mention about his all time record with the Bears, which seems to be quite impressive by the end of his tenure with the Capitals organization.Luckily, goaltender Joey Daccord stepped up
I would argue the word "luckily" doesn't match a neutral tone and the word goaltender is redundant. Maybe replace it with "In his place, Joey Daccord stepped up and helped the Kraken..... HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 00:56, 14 September 2024 (UTC)- @HickoryOughtShirt?4: Thanks for the review! I'll get to doing this stuff soon. From what I remember, this seems to pretty much be a GA review. Could you also check this article against the FA criteria if you haven't already (knowing the GA/FA criteria is not my forte).
- Oh, and I'll also ping @Alaney2k because he said he'd do a review as well. XR228 (talk) 03:16, 14 September 2024 (UTC)
- I'll probably get to doing this stuff sometime today or tomorrow. XR228 (talk) 17:28, 16 September 2024 (UTC)
- Honestly, I haven't really worked on this (or Wikipedia stuff at all) as much as I should have. Therefore I will rescind the nomination. XR228 (talk) 04:58, 12 November 2024 (UTC)
- I'll probably get to doing this stuff sometime today or tomorrow. XR228 (talk) 17:28, 16 September 2024 (UTC)