Talk:Phineas Flynn

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Phineas is not 8 there ages have never officialy been givin.Strootlecutie4427 (talk) 02:13, 6 June 2008 (UTC)strootlecutie4427

Actually, I think we're guessing that until we figure out the official dates. I just guessed Ferb's height, 3'2", after comparing Phineas' height to Ferb's Height, Ferb is just a few inches taller.

TheMinigolfMaster111 (talk) 18:06, 15 June 2008 (UTC)

Revamped

I will remake this page, if no one has a problem with it. It was merged 'cause it was cruddy, but now it won't. I can make a sandbox, but if not, I'll just make the page. SuperFlash101 (talk) 20:30, 13 February 2009 (UTC)

Comments arising from copyedit

Hi - I just did a couple of copyedit passes through this article. It's looking OK, but there's a few things that need some attention (and that your GA reviewer is bound to pick up):

• "Phineas has been positively reviewed by critics, one describing him and his brother as a "comical pairing of boisterous."" That sentence ends on an adjective, which can't be right. It needs rephrasing to make sense.

• "Phineas is portrayed as a selfless, intelligent, and creative child." Can you get a citation to support this? If not, it sounds too close to original research.

• "This decision was made to make the texture more thematic." - I wasn't sure what this sentence means. Can you rephrase it?

Otherwise, looks to me like you've done a good job avoiding in-universe tone and citing your sources. Good luck with the GA nomination! Gonzonoir (talk) 20:52, 23 June 2009 (UTC)

All attended to. The Flash ^{talk} 21:39, 23 June 2009 (UTC)

GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:Phineas Flynn/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

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This article is in decent shape, but it needs more work before it becomes a Good Article.

1. Is it well written?

   A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:

   In the lead, "Phineas appears in Phineas and Ferb merchandise, including plush toys[10], t-shirts[11], and a video game.[12]" ---> "Phineas appears in Phineas and Ferb merchandise, including plush toys,[10] t-shirts,[11] and a video game.[12]", the sources need to be behind the punctuation instead of before. In the Role in Phineas and Ferb section, "...toy design (in "Toy to the World")[14]; piracy (in "The Ballad of Badbeard")[15]; engineering (in "It's About Time!")[16]; ---> "...toy design (in "Toy to the World");[14] piracy (in "The Ballad of Badbeard");[15] engineering (in "It's About Time!");[16]". In the Hallmarks section, "...Phineas has several recurrent lines that feature in most episodes", this is me, "are" should go between "that" and "feature", and "feature" should be "featured". Same section, "In every episode Phineas and Ferb's pet platypus" ---> "In every episode, Phineas and Ferb's pet platypus". In the Personality section, "meanspiritedness" ---> "mean spiritedness". Same section, "In the episodes "One Good Scare Ought to Do It!" and "Hail Doofania" Phineas goes to great lengths to help his friend Isabella", add a comma after episode "Hail Doofania". In the Reception section, who's "Jean Yoo"? In other media section, "...Phineas has featured in several other pieces of merchandise from the series" ---> "...Phineas has been featured in several other pieces of merchandise from the series".

   Done with all. The Flash ^{talk} 23:01, 28 September 2009 (UTC)

   Check.

   B. It complies with the manual of style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation:

   Throughout the article, please link "animosity" and "Scholastic" to their correspondence articles. In the Creation and conception section, "...and with reference to the character Phileas Fogg (often misreferenced as "Phineas Fogg") from Around the World in 80 Days" ---> "and with reference to the character Phileas Fogg (often misreferenced as "Phineas Fogg") from Around the World in 80 Days (1873)", so that it can provide context for the reader. In the Hallmarks section, "isn't" ---> "is not". In the Reception section, why is "2008" linked?

   Done - I don't see 2008 being linked anywhere in Reception... The Flash ^{talk} 19:04, 28 September 2009 (UTC)

   Check.

2. Is it verifiable with no original research, as shown by a source spot-check?

   A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline:

   Reference 1, 3, 8, 9, 11, 21, 24, 43, and 48 are missing a date and accessdate. Also, you need to have a consistency with the references; either have them setup as "2009-08-28" or "August 28, 2009", per here. The date in Reference 34 should be "November 4, 2007" not "November 04, 2007", per here. Also, Reference 8, 10, and 26 are missing Publisher info.

   Done. The Flash ^{talk} 00:42, 1 October 2009 (UTC)

   Half-check. Dates/accessdates are missing, see here. Also, Reference 22 is dead.

   I put the accessdates there back when I did all the ref issues and it's not showing up. Have any idea why? Ref 22 archived. The Flash ^{talk} 18:58, 2 October 2009 (UTC)

   See here... check. --  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 00:35, 5 October 2009 (UTC)

   Thanks for that! :) The Flash ^{talk} 19:39, 5 October 2009 (UTC)

   B. Reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose):

   C. It contains no original research:

   Are "Common Sense Media", "Stylinonline.com", "Kidzworld", "411 News", "National Ledger" and "Piper's Pick TV" reliable sources?

   Common Sense Media - Review website for parents on what their kids watch, read, listen to, etc. - used at GA and FAC The Naked Brothers Band: The Movie.

   Stylinonline.com - t-shit retail website

   Kidszworld - website for media for children

   411 News - news website, like Newsarama

   National Ledger - Online newspaper

   Piper's Pick TV - YouTube hosted interview online show about children media, hosted by internet personality Piper Reese. I might be able to get a better version on the actual website.

   The Flash ^{talk} 00:25, 18 September 2009 (UTC)

   Check.

   D. It contains no copyright violations nor plagiarism:

3. Is it broad in its coverage?

   A. It addresses the main aspects of the topic:

   B. It stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style):

4. Is it neutral?

   It represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each:

5. Is it stable?

   It does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute:

6. Is it illustrated, if possible, by images?

   A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content:

   File:PhineasGuitarRacing.jpg needs a lower resolution.

   Tried re-uploading it, but it says it already exists on Commons and that I can't upload it... The Flash ^{talk} 00:25, 18 September 2009 (UTC)

   Why is at Commons? This a fair-use image and shouldn't be uploaded over there.

   Checked and it's not there. I dunno why it's happening... The Flash ^{talk} 23:18, 18 September 2009 (UTC)

   Well, I can't pass this article until a lower resolution is uploaded. --  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 18:28, 2 October 2009 (UTC)

   Done - don't know why it wasn't working before. The Flash ^{talk} 19:39, 5 October 2009 (UTC)

   Check.

   B. Images are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:

7. Overall:

   Pass or Fail:

   If the statements above can be answered, I will pass the article. Good luck with improving this article!

--  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 21:55, 28 August 2009 (UTC)

Thank you to SuperFlash for getting the stuff I left at the talk page [for a while now], because I have gone off and placed the article as GA. Congrats. ;) --  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 21:29, 6 October 2009 (UTC)

Thanks a bunch! :) The Flash ^{talk} 23:17, 6 October 2009 (UTC)

Ferb page

I was thinking of having a page for Ferb Fletcher, seeing that he is one of the series' main co-stars, along with Phineas. After all the title is "Phineas and Ferb, if I may point that out. —Preceding unsigned comment added by J.Severe (talk • contribs) 22:21, 30 August 2009 (UTC)

I totally agree. Ferb plays just as large as a role (although not through speaking) in the episodes, and has just as much information about him. I don't understand why Phineas should get a page while Ferb does not.

In fact, I think that we should maybe delete this article. Nothing here is not covered in the main show article or the character one. unsigned

Not true. Please read Wikipedia policy on television articles and articles in generally. Ferb does not have a page because no one has taken the time to make a page that has reliable references and non-fictional-biography info. Thank you. The Flash ^{talk} 00:50, 29 September 2009 (UTC)

I still say that this article should be deleted, however. There is nothing here that is not covered in the main series page and the character page. The character page mentions his personality and role, the main page talks about the concept and creation of the character and the show, the reception and media is covered along with the show with the show article, as well. The only thing missing is perhaps some exact quotes from people, which could easily be merged with the characters article. unsigned —Preceding unsigned comment added by 71.161.58.109 (talk) 22:18, 29 September 2009 (UTC)

The page fits WP:NOTABLE - please understand Wikipedia policy. That character list is, honestly, terrible - no reliable sources (or refs at all) and all pretty much WP:CRUFT. This page should not be deleted or merged in any way with any of those. Thank you. The Flash ^{talk} 22:29, 29 September 2009 (UTC)

Removed relationships section

It was all Original Research and none of it was referenced. It would have never made it to Good Article with that. If you want to put it in your subpage (User:YOURNAME/SUBPAGE) and try and reference every sentence with Reliable sources, then you are free to do so. _Blake ^{(Talk·Edits)} 12:23, 29 September 2009 (UTC)

Internet meme/image macro

there is an image macro w/ a picture of phineas with the words "pyramid [from silent hill] head as a child" super imposed above it. should it be mentioned? —Preceding unsigned comment added by 141.149.185.146 (talk) 20:26, 15 January 2010 (UTC)

No, unless there is a reliable source to back it up, by which I mean newspaper, online news site, etc. The Flash ^{I am Jack's complete lack of surprise} 20:09, 30 March 2010 (UTC)

Noble Prize?

It says in the opening that "It is also said in Phineas and Ferb's Quantum Boogaloo that he had won the nobel prize, as he was in Switzerland at the time for the "award ceremony"." This statement isn't completely accurate. While Linda Flynn-Fletcher does say that "Phineas is in Switzerland for the award ceremony" no one actually states that Phineas won the Noble Prize. That's the obvious assumption, but it's still an assumption. I'd think the sentence would be more accurate as "It is insinuated in Phineas and Ferb's Quantum Boogaloo that he had won the nobel prize, as he was in Switzerland at the time for the "award ceremony". But just my opinion... Sleeptech (talk) 07:11, 25 July 2010 (UTC)

And the Nobel Prizes are awarded in Sweden, not Switzerland. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 71.61.8.152 (talk) 23:39, 17 September 2010 (UTC)

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