Talk:Phoenix street circuit
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Champ Car circuit
editSuggest that the Champ Car circuit be described on this article also. Under a second header.Doctorindy 17:40, 9 July 2007 (UTC)
Tightened up prose
editPer a discussion on WP:AN/I, some of the copy here was too close to the source from which it was obtained. The amount of rewording necessary when using a source is always difficult, especially since Wikipedia is a secondary source and does not allow original research. When in doubt, Omit Needless Words, per The Elements of Style. In particular, take out adjectives. I tightened up some of the prose, which had a promotional style. John Nagle (talk) 06:33, 23 October 2015 (UTC)
It has been said...
edit...that the 'unexplained cancellation' was on account of the fact that the nearby Chandler Ostrich Festival (!) drew larger crowds. Whether or not this can be cited is a good question... - The Bushranger One ping only 02:50, 9 December 2016 (UTC)