Talk:Pierre-Louis Binet de Marcognet

Latest comment: 13 years ago by Ian Rose in topic MilHist B-Class assessment

MilHist B-Class assessment

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This reads very well, is nicely laid out, and is fully referenced. Just a couple of things you might consider for higher-level reviews:

  • Though the detail in general seems excellent, it does end a bit quickly, so be good to see if there's anything further on his post-military life.
  • Related to the above, did he marry and have a family?
  • From a MOS perspective, I think we're still expected to use ndashes for date ranges.

Very good work all round, however. Cheers, Ian Rose (talk) 06:08, 16 September 2011 (UTC)Reply