Semi-protected edit request on 19 January 2024

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[Pilates]

In the opening paragraph, please replace "contrology" with "controlology."

  Not done: Google ngrams lists both spellings as approximately equal, but Joseph Pilates himself seems to have spelled it the shorter way. PianoDan (talk) 18:54, 19 January 2024 (UTC)Reply

Semi-protected edit request on 3 October 2022

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Remove "There is however only limited evidence to support the use of Pilates to alleviate problems such as lower back pain.[5] Evidence from studies show that while Pilates improves balance, it has not been shown to be an effective treatment for any medical condition[6]"

Replace with "There is significant evidence to support the use of Pilates in conjunction with other medical modalities can work to alleviate problems such as recurring injury, injury post-rehabilitation, and common lower back pain[1]. Twenty-three studies, published between 2005 and 2016 assessed the efficacy of Pilates in the rehabilitation of low back pain, ankylosing spondylitis, multiple sclerosis, post-menopausal osteoporosis, non-structural scoliosis, hypertension and chronic neck pain. The majority of those clinical trials found Pilates as a rehabilitation tool to be effective in achieving desired outcomes, particularly in the area of reducing pain and disability.[2]" Gftrain (talk) 23:03, 3 October 2022 (UTC)Reply

References

  1. ^ Byrnes, Keira; Ping-Jung, Wu; Whillier, Stepheny. "Is Pilates an effective rehabilitation tool? A systematic review". National Library of Medicine. Retrieved 3 October 2022.
  2. ^ Byrnes, Keira; Ping-Jung, Wu; Whillier, Stepheny. "Is Pilates an effective rehabilitation tool? A systematic review". National Library of Medicine. Retrieved 3 October 2022.
  Not done for now: please establish a consensus for this alteration before using the {{edit semi-protected}} template. Such a change to the lead will be contentious, please establish a consensus to change it. ScottishFinnishRadish (talk) 00:53, 4 October 2022 (UTC)Reply

Wiki Education assignment: English 102

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  This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 9 January 2023 and 5 May 2023. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Jeremytm3 (article contribs).

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Semi-protected edit request on 24 February 2023

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Link to “Review of the Australian Government Rebate on Natural Therapies for Private Health Insurance” is currently dead. It should update with either:

  • Google Scholar

https://scholar.google.com/scholar_lookup?title=Review%20of%20the%20Australian%20Government%20Rebate%20on%20Natural%20Therapies%20for%20Private%20Health%20Insurance&publication_year=2015&author=Department%20of%20Health

  • Updated link to Australian web archive

https://web.archive.org.au/awa/20191108002458mp_/https://www1.health.gov.au/internet/main/publishing.nsf/Content/4899F1657E19A6F4CA2583A50020140D/$File/Natural%20Therapies%20Overview%20Report%20Final%20with%20copyright%2011%20March.pdf Jdw11 (talk) 02:38, 25 February 2023 (UTC)Reply

Wiki Education assignment: Research Process and Methodology - FA23 - Sect 202 - Thu

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  This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 6 September 2023 and 14 December 2023. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Kiki6789 (article contribs).

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