Talk:Pine Tavern

Latest comment: 10 years ago by Valfontis in topic Concern with {{advert}}

Concern with {{advert}}

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If anyone is still concerned about this reading like an advert, I'd suggest rewriting the menu section, perhaps with a liberal helping of "according to" so-and-so. It's hard to write descriptions of food in an encyclopedic manner, so in order for this article to not sound like a guidebook, it's possible the section needs to be severely pruned or removed all together. Valfontis (talk) 20:25, 24 March 2014 (UTC)Reply

  • I have removed the first paragraph in the Menu section that discussed the type of cuisine. I left the second paragraph that talks about the use of local products in the menu since that ties the restaurant to Wiki-food and Wiki-agricultural projects.--Orygun (talk) 00:36, 25 March 2014 (UTC)Reply
I think that's better. If anyone has any further concerns hopefully they will bring them to the talk page. Valfontis (talk) 01:28, 25 March 2014 (UTC)Reply