Talk:Pirate Galaxy

Latest comment: 1 year ago by Xandpochondria in topic A little bit of love

Overhaul

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I've edited the summary a bit to make it a little clearer and taken out all bad punctuation, smilies and opinionated remarks. I also took the whole thing out of italics.

This page definitely needs a good overhaul, but I'm probably not the best one to do it; it should follow the basic guidelines and have all the main headings - summary, plot, gameplay, awards etc. Remember this is an encyclopedia so it is not suitable for statements such as "this is the best space game" for example, which I removed from the old summary. Cooper 25 (talk) 14:08, 15 December 2010 (UTC)Reply

Someone added a ship-type heading. While I actually like the idea, I'm not sure it's fitting within a general encyclopedia and it certainly needs a bit of rewording. I had a go at making it easier to read and corrected a lot of grammar and spelling, but I'm not really up to rewriting the whole thing. Also it should probably be below the game description, not above it. Cooper 25 (talk) 02:54, 24 February 2011 (UTC)Reply

A little bit of love

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Hello all who read this! I recently got reccomended to copyedit and I did, but this is with layperson knowledge. If someone wants to improve, please do :) Xan 17:19, 14 December 2022 (UTC)Reply