Talk:Pirates of the Caribbean: Dead Men Tell No Tales/GA2

GA Review

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 00:26, 28 December 2020 (UTC)

I will be reviewing this article per a nice request from the nominator, Chompy Ace. Some Dude From North Carolina^{wanna talk?} 00:26, 28 December 2020 (UTC)

Basic stuff and comments

• Archive all archivable sources.
  • Current progress:
    94.7%

Infobox and lead

• Infobox looks good.

 Done Chompy Ace 03:27, 28 December 2020 (UTC)

• First sentence in the lead seems kinda long, so...

• Add a period to finish the sentence right after "from a script by Jeff Nathanson".

 Done Chompy Ace 03:27, 28 December 2020 (UTC)

• Merge "with Jerry Bruckheimer serving again as producer" to the sentence starting with "It is the sequel" so it reads "Produced by Jerry Bruckheimer, the film is the sequel..."

 Done Chompy Ace 03:27, 28 December 2020 (UTC)

• With this done, change "The film stars Johnny Depp" to "It stars Johnny Depp".

 Done Chompy Ace 03:27, 28 December 2020 (UTC)

@Chompy Ace: Initial comments. Some Dude From North Carolina^{wanna talk?} 01:17, 28 December 2020 (UTC)

Plot and cast

• Plot is 623 words, so it passes WP:FILMPLOT.

 Done Chompy Ace 22:06, 28 December 2020 (UTC)

• Remove the comma after "Royal Navy warship".

 Done Chompy Ace 22:06, 28 December 2020 (UTC)

• Add references after everyone's role.

 Done in a MCU style (example: Avengers: Infinity War) Chompy Ace 22:06, 28 December 2020 (UTC)

Other

• Couldn't find any major problems with production, release, reception, or future.

 Done for all Chompy Ace 23:46, 30 December 2020 (UTC)

• References 79, 86, 89, and 92 are all dead. Replace them.

 Done refs 79, 89, and 92 are archived via WP:ARCHIVETODAY; ref 86 removed Chompy Ace 23:46, 30 December 2020 (UTC)

• The image in #Marketing is kinda small and unnecessary, so I suggest removing it.

 Done Chompy Ace 23:46, 30 December 2020 (UTC)

• @Chompy Ace: Final notes. Ping me when you have added comments. Some Dude From North Carolina^{wanna talk?} 23:07, 30 December 2020 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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