Talk:Placental abruption

Would anybody think that including examples of people who were born after this happened be beneficial? Tim Tebow is the example that comes to my mind, though I'm sure there are others. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 68.155.26.70 (talk) 18:58, 17 November 2009 (UTC)

My goals

During this month of editing, I hope to add and cite more resources, make sure the article follow's wiki's suggested framework, and to cite more current literature. The article will give the readers a basic understanding of what is placenta abruption. My audience is non-medical professionals, so I want to make sure it is readable to them. Additionally, I want to work on the article's lead to make it clear and concise. Veronicagon4 (talk) 18:17, 11 November 2014 (UTC)

Peer-review response

Thank you for your contributions to wikipedia! I especially like the quantity of citations and content that you placed in the prognosis section.

Suggestions that I have for you to continue revisions include the following:

• Consider writing a topic sentence under the "Classification" heading
• Consider making a diagnosis category from the first paragraph of information that is currently posted under the "Management" section.
• Consider rewriting the sentence about Rhogam for the non-medical user.
• Simplify words such as hypofibrogenemia and tetanic
• Continue adding citations throughout the remainder of the article.

Let me know your thoughts on these ideas. Rkronen

Response to peer-review

Thank you for your suggestions Rkronen!

I have taken into consideration and responded to the majority of your suggested edits.

• I wrote a topic sentence under the "Classification" heading.
• I made a diagnosis category from the first paragraph of information that was previously posted under the "Management" section.
• I have continued to add citations throughout the article since you last reviewed it.
• I will continue attempting to simplify medical terms.

Thanks again! :) Veronicagon4 (talk) 19:33, 19 November 2014 (UTC)