Talk:Plandemic/GA1
Latest comment: 3 years ago by Gerald Waldo Luis in topic GA Review
GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 18:40, 13 March 2021 (UTC)
Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 18:40, 13 March 2021 (UTC)
- Some Dude From North Carolina, thanks for picking this up! GeraldWL 01:42, 15 March 2021 (UTC)
Lead
edit- In the third sentence, it should be mentioned that you're talking about the first video.
- Done.
- Other than that, the image and the lead are well-written without any other issues.
Background
edit- "in March 11" → "on March 11"
- Done.
- The last sentences in a few paragraph need references.
- "bioweapon control" → "bioweapon to control"
- Done.
First video
edit- "in future" → "in the future"
- Done.
- The last sentence from #Reception needs a reference, and Plandemic: Indoctornation doesn't have to be linked.
- I moved it to Indoctornation's production, since it's more relevant there. The last unreferenced bit's removed.
Plandemic: Indoctornation
edit- Fair-use rationale is in good condition, so that's good.
- Add a comma after "Google".
- Done.
- "jeopardised" → "jeopardized" (consistency with the rest of the article)
- Done.
- "had interest" → "had an interest"
- Done.
Sinclair Broadcasting Group
edit- Couldn't find any major issues here.
References
edit- Sources are archived already.
- Websites are also linked.
External links
edit- Is the link to Rotten Tomatoes necessary if it doesn't have a score?
- You're right... removed it. GeraldWL 01:34, 15 March 2021 (UTC)
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