- "fears it would be biased towards critics of climate change, despite the fact that the programme was in development for 18 months" - I don't get it. It could be critical and be in development for a long time...
- Might look better if you take the refs out of the lead
- No relevant images? (I wouldn't be surprised if there aren't)
- You don't need to say that the language of refs is English. This is the English Wikipedia :)
- Newspaper titles in refs (Guardian, Sun, etc.) need to be in italics (and wlink all publishers if possible please, but that's not necessary)
- "Another critic, director of Friends of the Earth Tony Juniper said," - need a comma before his name, I think
Leave a note on my talk page when done. Cheers, dihydrogen monoxide (H20) 09:42, 1 March 2008 (UTC)Reply
- Passed. In answer to the question on my talk page, an image of a person involved would be fine, I think. Make it a free one, obviously. dihydrogen monoxide (H20) 04:05, 2 March 2008 (UTC)Reply